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"Hi Stanford."You said as you came into the room though a portal.
"Oh Hello, what brings you to our world ?" Stanford replied after turning around his chair from his desk.Pushing up his glasses in the process.
"Well I'm trying to work on a assignment and stuff but my focus is all wandering, and procrastinating seems better." "I see as he held his chin. Well lucky for you I know how to deal with this situation."He gleamed as he put his hand up with his index finger up.(like a ah ha moment)
"Throughout my years of studying I will tell you one thing that it's best to make work fun or else you won't get anything, but you also shouldn't focus so hard or overthink it.It's all about keeping it simple. Sit we have lot to discuss. "As Stanford gestured you to the chair besides him. You then grab the other chair and sit down next to Ford.
"Now I know college( or insert grade you're in)is different for you than it was for me. We just need to find the rights things to get you going. I know music helps you, also writing everything on your mind when it's too full of thoughts, and trying to find a way that works. All we need to do is find that so you're improve your performance and mind. Let's see here your earphones, you left them the last time you were here."As he pulls them out of his desk drawer, and puts on the papers he has layed out."What's your mind want to listen too right now?" Ford then looked up at you with a half smile.".....Well right now I want to listen to (favorite study song)." As you hand Ford your phone, and he plugs in the earphones.
"Ok here make that change as he hands you your device,now drink plenty of water,have a smooth flowing pen to get those thoughts down nice and easy." He then turns around to see a Bill Cipher plush appear on his desk. "Oh yeah here's your plush of Bill, heh it's weird but he doesn't seem to mind watching over you while I got stuff to do. Just don't let him distract you, or fall asleep." As he picks it off the desk, and places it in your hands."Now we just need to find that peak of performance then you're off on a roll. In a world full of knowledge flowing through your mind. You will have your assignments done in no time."He then gets down to my level, and places his hand on my shoulder. "Anything is possible,I mean look at me I got 12 PHDs, and traveled to other dimensions. No other human has done that. Although it wasn't my intention. (clears his throat)Well..anyway let's get going shall we? Now I'm gonna write a list of all the things your need to do by today and nothing else past that so you can do your priorities first."(Scribble's on a piece of paper, and hands it to you)
"Oookay everything sees in order. You're going to do just fine. All you lack is the ability to believe in yourself and see that you are capable. I let myself down by not listening to my friend's advice, and I caused trouble for my family, gravity falls, the world, and across dimensions. Now look what's the worst thing you can do. I'm pretty sure I done it all.......oh unless you count Rick then I look a lot better."(Adverting eye contact for that tad bit)"The point is to take risks like my brother Stanley, and not let your mind be set in way that you can't go anywhere.He never really got the chance to express himself the way he should have."He then sighs and looks down for a moment before bringing his head back up.
"I know you don't mean to but you constantly put yourself down, and think no I can't or you simply don't put the extra step forward. Your young ,and you can be bold. You're in one of the best times of your life."He then places his other arm on your shoulder and starts to smile.
"Right now the focus should be on finishing school, and getting that degree. I will be with you every step of the way. It would be my pleasure to see you develop that brain into something extraordinary, no matter what path you take.Your dream was to go to (your dream) and become a (your dream profession).This is the first step in your journey ,and developing these skills will help you overcome many obstacles. The key to solving all your problems is simple. Its getting good grades, and doing your best everyday ,and with all your might. When you have good grades you don't have to worry about these other things you have been experiencing right now.Everything will be alright if you do that ,and taking proper care of yourself." Then a beep beep beep sound of a digital clock goes off.
"Oh my it seems I wasted enough time already. It time for you to get going. Remember what I said, and don't forget that we are with you every step of the way."
"Thanks Ford I really appreciate it." You said as you hugged him goodbye and left through the portal back to your own world.
Ford x Troubled School reader
Since this is my first fanfic ever posted. I would like some nice helpful feedback to improve my skills as a newbie. Also feel free to message me about the story, or if you just want to talk.
"Oh Hello, what brings you to our world ?" Stanford replied after turning around his chair from his desk.Pushing up his glasses in the process.
"Well I'm trying to work on a assignment and stuff but my focus is all wandering, and procrastinating seems better." "I see as he held his chin. Well lucky for you I know how to deal with this situation."He gleamed as he put his hand up with his index finger up.(like a ah ha moment)
"Throughout my years of studying I will tell you one thing that it's best to make work fun or else you won't get anything, but you also shouldn't focus so hard or overthink it.It's all about keeping it simple. Sit we have lot to discuss. "As Stanford gestured you to the chair besides him. You then grab the other chair and sit down next to Ford.
"Now I know college( or insert grade you're in)is different for you than it was for me. We just need to find the rights things to get you going. I know music helps you, also writing everything on your mind when it's too full of thoughts, and trying to find a way that works. All we need to do is find that so you're improve your performance and mind. Let's see here your earphones, you left them the last time you were here."As he pulls them out of his desk drawer, and puts on the papers he has layed out."What's your mind want to listen too right now?" Ford then looked up at you with a half smile.".....Well right now I want to listen to (favorite study song)." As you hand Ford your phone, and he plugs in the earphones.
"Ok here make that change as he hands you your device,now drink plenty of water,have a smooth flowing pen to get those thoughts down nice and easy." He then turns around to see a Bill Cipher plush appear on his desk. "Oh yeah here's your plush of Bill, heh it's weird but he doesn't seem to mind watching over you while I got stuff to do. Just don't let him distract you, or fall asleep." As he picks it off the desk, and places it in your hands."Now we just need to find that peak of performance then you're off on a roll. In a world full of knowledge flowing through your mind. You will have your assignments done in no time."He then gets down to my level, and places his hand on my shoulder. "Anything is possible,I mean look at me I got 12 PHDs, and traveled to other dimensions. No other human has done that. Although it wasn't my intention. (clears his throat)Well..anyway let's get going shall we? Now I'm gonna write a list of all the things your need to do by today and nothing else past that so you can do your priorities first."(Scribble's on a piece of paper, and hands it to you)
"Oookay everything sees in order. You're going to do just fine. All you lack is the ability to believe in yourself and see that you are capable. I let myself down by not listening to my friend's advice, and I caused trouble for my family, gravity falls, the world, and across dimensions. Now look what's the worst thing you can do. I'm pretty sure I done it all.......oh unless you count Rick then I look a lot better."(Adverting eye contact for that tad bit)"The point is to take risks like my brother Stanley, and not let your mind be set in way that you can't go anywhere.He never really got the chance to express himself the way he should have."He then sighs and looks down for a moment before bringing his head back up.
"I know you don't mean to but you constantly put yourself down, and think no I can't or you simply don't put the extra step forward. Your young ,and you can be bold. You're in one of the best times of your life."He then places his other arm on your shoulder and starts to smile.
"Right now the focus should be on finishing school, and getting that degree. I will be with you every step of the way. It would be my pleasure to see you develop that brain into something extraordinary, no matter what path you take.Your dream was to go to (your dream) and become a (your dream profession).This is the first step in your journey ,and developing these skills will help you overcome many obstacles. The key to solving all your problems is simple. Its getting good grades, and doing your best everyday ,and with all your might. When you have good grades you don't have to worry about these other things you have been experiencing right now.Everything will be alright if you do that ,and taking proper care of yourself." Then a beep beep beep sound of a digital clock goes off.
"Oh my it seems I wasted enough time already. It time for you to get going. Remember what I said, and don't forget that we are with you every step of the way."
"Thanks Ford I really appreciate it." You said as you hugged him goodbye and left through the portal back to your own world.
Ford x Troubled School reader
Since this is my first fanfic ever posted. I would like some nice helpful feedback to improve my skills as a newbie. Also feel free to message me about the story, or if you just want to talk.
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Not bad, I liked it. Some tips I have for you; space out the paragraphs. It'll help the reader stop and think about the paragraph, like if they need to do something and stop reading, they'll remember where they were easier.
When showing an action during dialogue, stop the dialogue, add the action with a comma, and go back to the dialogue. Here's an example; "I hope you, ya know," I looked down in embarrassment, "Enjoy." The parentheses really don't help with actions, it's better to only use those for information that hasn't been revealed or for a play.
If you need or want anymore tips, DM me and I can help.
When showing an action during dialogue, stop the dialogue, add the action with a comma, and go back to the dialogue. Here's an example; "I hope you, ya know," I looked down in embarrassment, "Enjoy." The parentheses really don't help with actions, it's better to only use those for information that hasn't been revealed or for a play.
If you need or want anymore tips, DM me and I can help.